Your first paper is bound to be a learning experience. I got a C for the first paper on my master's and I graduated with distinction (which is the highest award you can get in the UK). I too had been out of school for a while and I learned as I went. It will be so much easier to write the second paper once you have feedback from your first. I bet you've done a great job, anyway.
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Let us know how you get on!